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Drip. Drip. drip.

We sit close together, a woolen blanket draping over our bodies, encasing us in fuzzy warmth. The cool air kissed our pale skin, teasing us to travel back inside and watch T.V.

Drip. Drip. Dribble.

The little driblets of rain softly splatter against the metallic porch roof hanging above us, supported by strong beams at each corner. I shiver as the surrounding trees rustle, and your arm gingerly wraps around my waist, cracked, swollen fingers brushing against my blouse. Smiling, I rest my head in the crook of your neck, reaching over and gripping your hand lightly, pressing tenderly on your calluses as you bend down to kiss my ear.

Dribble. Drip. Drop.

I shift on the wooden bench you bought yesterday at Constens, which was put on sale at least two times. You finger the cloth on my shirt and rest your head against mine, our bodies fitting together perfectly like puzzle pieces.

Drop. Drop. Drip.

In your hand sits a cigarette, a trail of smoke protruding from the end. The smell engulfs us, more like a fragrance to me, reminding me of you. Your hand slips down to my thigh, gently rubbing it, intending to make me feel comfortable. I smile and lightly kiss the corner of your mouth, which rises up in a grin. I don't know why you try to comfort me, since I already feel that way whenever I'm around you. Closing my eyes I rest my head and nuzzle closer to you, watching the smoke dance into the rain.
this was one of the free writes I'm really proud about that I wrote yesterday during one of the workshops ^^ hope you like it!

thinking of a special someone
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OhLookItsAnArtist Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice writing there!
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Fyreglyphs Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :) :hug: this is technically the second draft, the last one was so sucky XD
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OhLookItsAnArtist Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I think this draft is a good draft. I can picture it in my head
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Fyreglyphs Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yay ^^ that was what my meaning was :) I'm at camp right now XD heyheyheyheyhey you should get on chat! :D my chatroom ish #FlamesNeverDiesChat
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TheNinjaFreak12 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
...awwww. that's really sweet. :aww: me like.
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